focus group, for treatment

the imrovements that i made due to the group discussion that we conducted wa these

we decided to scrap the jumping into the club because we thought that it was too random and it does not fit in with the video

another improvement is that it would be better if we got rid of the end part of the video where there was alot of instromental clips, but because it does not go with the music genre.

The group decided that the shot of gyptian drinking alcohol and smoking would be a bad idea because of advertisement issues

We also decided that the video takes to long to get into it, so as a result of this I have shortened some shots and I have totally got rid of some

Another decision that we made is that it would be a good idea if I kept referring back to the same shots but different clips of that shot